BEST FRIENDS

by Kanga
in my own little bubble

 

Everything we do we do it together

Help annoy their big brother    

When they are sad  

If there is a fight            

and nothing's right           

go get every happy picture,   

of all the good times

We used to play princess  

and our shining armoured man,             

always came to save us, 

but really who was always there? 

Our friends, who will always care.

And how about in the holidays,  

when we played in the pool,

Splishing and splashing

Hoping never, to have to go to school.


Those were the some of the best times,

the ones in the past


But now focus on the future,

And make them the ones that last.

Everything we do, we do it togther  

nothing stands in our way   

We are best friends forever.

OK SO I KNOW THIS IS SO BAD AND IT DOESN"T MAKE SENSE AND IT DOESNT HAVE THE RIGHT RYTHUM BUT BARE WITH ME HERE.. woops caps lock hehe, anyway i did this just then so i'll fix it later :P anyway KK made me do it! lol ok not really but still...haha


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Wow! Absolutely brilliant!

Wow! Absolutely brilliant! Now this is talent! Smile

OMGosh!! are you blind?!?!??

OMGosh!! are you blind?!?!?? i cant believe you think this is good!!!! I think that you caught a bug in Europe and it's messing with your mind lol !!!

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 "Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is the present that's why they call it a gift." -- my RE teacher and that kung foo turtle

*laughs* No, I think you are

*laughs* No, I think you are the blind one! How can you not see the bond and brilliance in this poetic piece?! Smile

Actually, Cass, I kind of

Actually, Cass, I kind of like this. Not great, but it's fine. Sorry if this sounds rude. I guess I'm used to reading Kavalnain, LOL! It isn't nearly as good as Kavalnain or Paige, but it isn't bad actually. It's sweet, and not bad at all. Again, sorry if I sound mean, I don't mean to. It was a pretty good poem.
". . .a roadtrip through the land of Lean Beef. . ."
--Some random radio ad.

What Zoe really means,

What Zoe really means, Kanga, is that you write far better than I do. I'm just putting it in the right words for her, that's all. Smile

Keep your words to yourself

Keep your words to yourself KK, you're the best poet on here!!! Right, Cass? She is! Well, Paige is really good too, it's close beetween them . . .
". . .a roadtrip through the land of Lean Beef. . ."
--Some random radio ad.

Zoe, I'm afraid you have

Zoe, I'm afraid you have lost your mind! There has only been one poem in my life that has ever been written well! It's a shame that I lost it the night I wrote it. Your poetry is way beyond my reach! You hold true talent, my dear friend. Even the best poet in the universe would agree to that! Smile

Are you kidding??? Every

Are you kidding??? Every poem you write is good! Wow, that poem you wrote and lost must have been epic. Really, too bad you lost it. That happened to me once, I wrote this really good poem (on Kidpub actually) but when I went to submit it, I had forgotten a title so it was deleted. Sigh . . .
Oh, like my new signature? If you don't want it on there, I"ll tak it off.
Wait, hope, and write more poetry.
-What I tell Kavalnain

sorry kavalnain but i agree

sorry kavalnain but i agree with Zoe COMPLETELY! mine is soooo much worse than your's or paiges because i am not a poem person and i suck! lol you and paige are like THE BEST poem writers i have ever seen...seriously no really, i'm not kidding! haha

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"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is the present that's why they call it a gift." -- my RE teacher and that kung foo turtle

Kanga, not bad. Fairly

Kanga, not bad. Fairly written, continued rhyme scheme.

KK the great.
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What on earth are you talking about?!?!? You're like the best poet on here! Well, one of them at least. Ben, Paige and I (not really) run it close. Lol. But still, never doubt your talent, didn't you tell me that once?

So lock the windows, and bolt the doors. Cuz I've got enough problems without creating more! ~Relient K Devastaion and Reform

Zoe: I really love your

Zoe: I really love your signature, if you'd like to know. It makes me feel rather special, in a way. Thank you.

The poem I did lose was shockingly mistaken for one of Shakespeare's best works! Even the teachers thought I had stolen it from the remarkable Shakespeare! It took a lot of convincing and proof that it was a piece of my own. I felt so at loss when I realized that I couldn't find it an hour after I wrote it.

I'm sorry about your deleted poem. I hate it when things happen like that.

You compliment me more than I deserve, my dear sweet Zoe! Way too kind, you are way too kind! Smile

Kanga: You may agree with

Kanga: You may agree with her, but I certainly do not. Your poetry is absolutely amazing, and you know it! Of course it's better than mine, and you have no way to prove it otherwise! Smile

Calla: You are exceedingly

Calla: You are exceedingly kind as well, my dear Calla. Surely you cannot believe that my poetry is of higher quality and interest then your own. I must be going blind if that is what I read from you!

Yes, I did write that. Funny how I don't necessarily believe it when it comes to reflect upon myself, isn't it? But that doesn't mean you should stop believing it, because everybody knows that your poetry is beyond brilliance! Smile

oh no not calla too! *says

oh no not calla too! *says in a horrifed voice* Kavalnain you gave her the bug!!!!!!!!!!!! you ruined her brain!!!!!!!!!!!!! now she doesn't know whats good or whats bad! well at least for my stuff anyway lol because shes right, you are probably the best poet on here, including paige and ben and calla and stuff XD also, which of your poems were mistaken for Shakespears great works or whatever?

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Alice: "No one will dare to call you plain when I'm through with you." Bella: "Only because they're afraid you'll suck their blood."

seriously KK you really need

seriously KK you really need to be MUCH less modest, really. I mean SERIOUSLY i will get angry if you keep being modest...though probably not like maron *shivers* lol jks anywayss, you are a FANTASTIC poetry writer and i wouldn't be surprised if you became published and famous right at this second because your so goooooood! seriously O.O btw do you have an email? cause i wanna send you something :)

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Alice: "No one will dare to call you plain when I'm through with you." Bella: "Only because they're afraid you'll suck their blood."

Double K: Hey, you've got

Double K:
Hey, you've got talent. You actually inspired me to write love poems. Yours always convay something that touches me deeply. Mine are a sorry attempt to mimic.

So lock the windows, and bolt the doors. Cuz I've got enough problems without creating more! ~Relient K Devastaion and Reform


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